People say your idea is great. They like your posts. Some even ask for your number. Then nothing happens.
Most of us describe our work the way we see it: our skills, our process, our words. Buyers think differently. They’re looking for a clear answer to “what will I get, and is it worth it for my situation?” If they have to work that out themselves, most of them quietly move on.
This guide helps you turn a broad description into an offer someone can judge in a minute.
Start with one buying situation
Pick a recent problem you’re well placed to help with, and name the moment someone starts looking for help. For example: a founder launched a service, got enquiries, sent proposals, and lost every one of them. The question on their mind is “why does nobody sign?”
A founder hiring their first marketer has a completely different question, even though both are “early-stage founders”. The audience label is useful, but the buying situation decides which example and which proof belong on your page.
Compare yourself with what the buyer does today
Your alternatives may include another expert, a spreadsheet, a junior employee, an existing agency, or simply waiting. Ask a few potential buyers what they tried most recently and why it wasn’t enough. Rob Fitzpatrick’s book The Mom Test is a good, short guide to asking these questions without leading people.
Scroll across to compare every column.
| What the buyer does today | Why they might stick with it | What your page needs to make clear |
|---|---|---|
| Do it themselves | Costs less cash and keeps control | The work and the judgement you take off their plate |
| Hire an employee | Someone available every day | Your scope and when you’re available |
| Use software | Cheap for repeat tasks | Where a human decision is still needed |
| Wait | The problem is bearable today | Why acting now matters, if it genuinely does |
You don’t need to criticise any of these. Explain the situation in which your approach makes sense, and the trade-off the buyer is choosing.
Turn a big promise into visible work
Here’s a typical before and after for a service business:
Before: “We offer complete digital growth solutions for ambitious businesses.”
After: “For small service businesses that get enquiries but sign few projects, we review your enquiry-to-proposal path and find the next change to test. You get a marked-up proposal and a short action list within a week.”
The second version names a situation, a deliverable and a timeframe. Before someone buys, they’ll still want the fee, what they need to provide, the review process and what’s excluded, so put those on the page too, using your real terms.
The promise is specific enough to evaluate: a defined review, a marked-up proposal and a delivery window. Use this level of detail for your actual offer, including its fee and boundaries.
Match your proof to the buyer’s question
Different proof answers different questions:
- A worked example shows how you think.
- A sample deliverable shows what the buyer actually receives.
- A case study, shared with permission, shows what happened in a real project.
If you share a case, include the starting point, your exact role, what changed, over what period, and what else may have helped. A famous logo on its own answers none of those questions.
Start with a complete sample deliverable and explain the decisions behind it. A buyer should be able to see what your work would change before committing to a larger project.
Run a five-person comprehension check
Ask five people who resemble your buyer to read the page without any explanation from you. Then ask:
- Who is this for?
- What would the buyer get?
- What would they need to do next?
- What’s still unclear?
Write down their answers word for word. Their responses point to different fixes:
- If they describe different deliverables, the wording needs work.
- If they understand it but don’t need it, it’s a fit or timing question.
- If they want it but can’t justify the spend, look at value, proof and the buying process.
Use the first five readers to identify recurring misunderstandings. Then test whether the clarified offer creates useful enquiries; comprehension and demand answer different questions.
Keep the same offer across every touchpoint
Someone might see your comment on LinkedIn, tap through to your profile, then land on your website. Each step should continue the same idea. If your comment talks about customers, your profile talks about “digital transformation” and your website talks about AI, the visitor has to reconcile three businesses before they message you, and most won’t bother.
Take one page you have today and complete this sentence: “This is for someone who is trying to ___, has already tried ___, and needs ___.” Then check what proof that page offers.
Change one sentence before you change everything
A useful first edit can be one sentence and one sample deliverable. Test that with your five readers before you rebuild the website. You’ll learn faster, and you’ll keep what’s already working.
A positioning sentence you can use today
Write one sentence with four concrete parts: the buyer, the moment they need help, the work you deliver and the decision it helps them make.
Worked example
“For interior design studios getting the wrong enquiries, I build a project-enquiry page that makes budget, location and project type clear before the first call.”
Put the same idea in your social bio, website opening and proposal. Support it with a sample enquiry page. Change the wording when people misunderstand the work; change the offer when they understand it but need something else.
Questions you may have
Won’t a narrow offer scare away other customers?
It usually does the opposite. A clear offer for one situation is easier to recommend, and people outside that situation still ask whether you can help them. You can always add a second offer once the first is working.
Should I put my price on the page?
If your work is standard enough to price, a starting price helps people judge fit before they contact you. If every project is different, explain what drives the price and what the first conversation covers.
What if I don’t have any case studies yet?
Show a complete sample of what a buyer receives and explain your process. Label samples clearly. That shows how you think, and it’s honest.
Bring the sentence that keeps causing questions
Send me: “This is how I describe my work: ___. I want to help ___. People keep asking ___.” A rough version is perfect. I’ll tell you what I’d change first.
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